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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:25 pm 
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Lesson 24

"In lesson M1W3D3, you were introduced to the concept of the wheel" could this be changed to "lesson seventeen"?

"...but I have always been a bit obsessive, smile." Again with the strange use of this. I suggest it's unnecessary.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:54 pm 
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Lesson 25

"recognized that each of element of a compulsive behavior" should be "each element"

"lost the ability to engage in a healthy, rational decision-making" should be "in healthy"

"when in the face of this stimuli." should be "when faced with this stimuli"

"Because when it is all said and done" should be "when all is said"

"Without these firm, rational set of rules," should be "this"

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 2:01 am 
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Lesson 26

"-providing them with the impetus to actually enhance their compulsive experiences." should be "you" and "your"

"This change can involve either increases/decreases" should be "increases or decreases"

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 9:31 am 
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Lesson 2

"Albert Einstein, Mark Twain, Ghandi, Sister Theresa, Martin Luther King"

Should be "Albert Einstein, Mark Twain, Gandhi, Mother Teresa, Martin Luther King, Jr."

And "not necessarily Ghandi like" should be "not necessarily Gandhi-like"


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 1:12 pm 
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While the smiles may be unnessary they were apart of Jon's personality and he is the author so I don't agree that they should be removed. Sys please leave them in.

Also there is a reason Jon wrote Sister Theresa rather than Mother Theresa. Not to get into any faith discussions or disagreements I'll simply state that if you are Catholic Mother Theresa is the way she would be referred to, if you are a Christian ( or even some other faiths) but not Catholic we would refer to her as Sister Theresa.


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 9:13 pm 
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Excellent Adaman, I can't believe I didn't pick up on those.

Whether Sister or Mother, I believe it's Teresa, rather than Theresa.

I see your point about the smiles, smile. I get a bit carried away when I'm editing, these are suggestions only.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:44 pm 
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Lesson 35

"For instance, if I in a building and I have the opportunity" maybe "if I work in a building"?

"ended up turning to artificial means (e.g. compulsive behavior?)" should be "behavior)?"

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 6:54 pm 
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:) AE!!

Or if I am in a building...


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 12:37 am 
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Additional lesson: Love addiction
http://www.recoverynation.com/recovery/ ... iction.htm

"for me…I knew just knew it." drop the first "knew"

"As the relationships began to lost their intensity" should be "lose"

"but in which many love addicts do." drop the "in"

"But if was to map out a brief path" perhaps "if I was to"

"there is only four areas that are" should be "there are"

"would recommend everyone reading through this lesson " should be "read"

"(as well as the associated lesson “Depression and Suicide in Recovery”." should have a close-brackets: "recovery)."

" put things on the back burned" should be "burner"

The paragraph beginning "Your role in these lessons will be to create your own wheel" talks extensively about Jon's coaching sessions, and should perhaps be cut after "awareness on your part"

"In fact, it is in this irrational thought process" should be "it is this"

"In it's extreme form" should be "its"

"With these being such a core part love addiction," should be "part of love"

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:31 am 
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Additional lesson "covering your tracks"

http://www.recoverynation.com/recovery/ ... tracks.htm

is missing.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:08 am 
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Lesson 23

"the elements that are involved in with artificially managing" should be "involved in"

"There are three areas were measuring compulsive behavior" should be "where"

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 6:13 am 
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Lesson 22

"This will allow you to domany other things" should probably be "do many"

"actions in a healthy person; disassociation in an unhealthy person)." should be "dissociation"

"and one who has develop an addiction" should be "developed"

"food, alcohol, love) to become further ingrained" should be "becoming"

"how it would feel like to run his fingers" should be "how it would feel to run"

"it all effects the intensity" should be "affects"

"her partner's stimulation is also effected by the intensity" should be "affected"

"higher number the farther away the specific element" should be "further"

"we have the sum score of each element in red:" the scores aren't actually in red.

"overall level of stimulation produce by the act" should be "produced"

"understand how you can effect the overall level of stimulation" should be "affect"

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 6:14 am 
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Lesson 30

"experienced as a result of the triggering stimuli and the compulsive ritualistic behavior" should be "of triggering"

"Whey your actions conflict with these values, negative emotions are produced." should be "When"

" behavior-based emotions that little regard for long-term fulfillment." should be something like "hold" "show" or "possess"

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 2:33 am 
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On lesson 49, the link to the Sexual Health Assessment is broken, linking to http://recoverynation.com/recovery/It's ... ssment.php

Rather than

http://www.recoverynation.com/recovery/ ... ssment.php


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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 3:49 pm 
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Lesson 31

"A. Make a list of all of identifiable stressors" should be "of all"

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